Friday, October 28, 2011
T4W1 My Best Independent Writing
Note: Remember that I always have to indent my writing and use
different beginnings. Also remember the 5 W's,
Who, What, Where, When, and Why.???????
Details about the main idea, does this word best describe my writing, is it the best word to say what I mean????
The reason why I’m writing this is because I am trying to comprehend my learning, this writing is for the whole world to see and read.
School Holidays
Plan
Intro What’s happening for the holidays?
P.2 What is my favourite thing during the holidays?
P.3 How do I feel
Conclusion What is my goal for term 4?
Introduction
I so can’t wait for school holidays because my dad’s family is coming over for a visit, even though the date has passed it was on the 1st week of school holidays. I felt pretty excited because the feed was at my grandmas house, I think it’s going to be a really big feast. After my dads family visit my family and I are going to the beach for a picnic, what an amazing holiday that I’m having. Holidays is on for 2 weeks, how cool is that.
Writing 2
My favourite thing during the holidays is meeting my dads special family because recently I haven’t seen my cousins for a few yrs. They haven’t notice me since for a few yrs but they are still my cousins, this was my 1st favourite thing in the holidays. “What was my 2nd favourite thing in the holidays? Well, as you know that some of you students have been to the beach for a picnic, that is just what I did but different days and different times. Going to the beach was making my heart pump, it meant to me that I was so nervous to go to the beach. As we got their, it was packed of allot kids and adults playing and having allot of fun. I wished that could make new friends just to make me happy and enjoyable because I haven’t seen any friends from my school but my cousin Ashin. My very funny cousin was playing basketball with his mates, feeling playful.
Writing 3
The feeling about my holiday is kind of a bit fun because their were just about two things that I did in the holidays. It is worth, a bit. Sometimes I feel sad, sometimes I feel mad because staying at home is a feeling to me that is so boring. Some day I will feel happy and some day I would feel so excited when I do something fun and go somewhere that I haven’t been to and that looks so interesting to see.
Conclusion
My goal for term 4 is to focused on what I’m doing even though if someone talks to me I really have to ignore them. When the teacher tells me what to do I have to do, the reason why I have to learn more is to make my family proud, proud of me and proud of what I have for my learning. Sometimes I just can’t be focused when people are talking around me, I just feel like I’m not focused. Sometimes I’m learning on my work but sometimes I’m not, not working is not my type but working is. This whole thing is about my learning for Term 4.
different beginnings. Also remember the 5 W's,
Who, What, Where, When, and Why.???????
Details about the main idea, does this word best describe my writing, is it the best word to say what I mean????
The reason why I’m writing this is because I am trying to comprehend my learning, this writing is for the whole world to see and read.
School Holidays
Plan
Intro What’s happening for the holidays?
P.2 What is my favourite thing during the holidays?
P.3 How do I feel
Conclusion What is my goal for term 4?
Introduction
I so can’t wait for school holidays because my dad’s family is coming over for a visit, even though the date has passed it was on the 1st week of school holidays. I felt pretty excited because the feed was at my grandmas house, I think it’s going to be a really big feast. After my dads family visit my family and I are going to the beach for a picnic, what an amazing holiday that I’m having. Holidays is on for 2 weeks, how cool is that.
Writing 2
My favourite thing during the holidays is meeting my dads special family because recently I haven’t seen my cousins for a few yrs. They haven’t notice me since for a few yrs but they are still my cousins, this was my 1st favourite thing in the holidays. “What was my 2nd favourite thing in the holidays? Well, as you know that some of you students have been to the beach for a picnic, that is just what I did but different days and different times. Going to the beach was making my heart pump, it meant to me that I was so nervous to go to the beach. As we got their, it was packed of allot kids and adults playing and having allot of fun. I wished that could make new friends just to make me happy and enjoyable because I haven’t seen any friends from my school but my cousin Ashin. My very funny cousin was playing basketball with his mates, feeling playful.
Writing 3
The feeling about my holiday is kind of a bit fun because their were just about two things that I did in the holidays. It is worth, a bit. Sometimes I feel sad, sometimes I feel mad because staying at home is a feeling to me that is so boring. Some day I will feel happy and some day I would feel so excited when I do something fun and go somewhere that I haven’t been to and that looks so interesting to see.
Conclusion
My goal for term 4 is to focused on what I’m doing even though if someone talks to me I really have to ignore them. When the teacher tells me what to do I have to do, the reason why I have to learn more is to make my family proud, proud of me and proud of what I have for my learning. Sometimes I just can’t be focused when people are talking around me, I just feel like I’m not focused. Sometimes I’m learning on my work but sometimes I’m not, not working is not my type but working is. This whole thing is about my learning for Term 4.
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
T3W9 My Best Independent Writing
Note: Remember that I always have to indent and check if my
writing makes sense. Also make sure that I have checked my
spelling mistakes and do not forget about the 5 ws.
Who, What, Where, When and Why.
Plan
Intro: Netball- What I do first
P1. What are the skills an d when I started.
Conclusion. How do I feel playing Netball
Introduction of Netball
When I first go to Netball, the thing that all students do is sign up for the Netball team. Most often, we play before we get picked for the team, it’s really tough for the coach to decide because, their a always allot of Netball players who are really good but doesn't get picked for the Netball Team. When I get picked for playing Netball, the first thing that I do, is train myself to be a position where I can be an awesome defender and attacker. Being an defender is one of my favourite, because it brings my attention when I defend someone and I get caught for catching the ball and my team feels really cheerful because that’s when we get the ball into the hoop and, “SCORE!”
Writing Paragraph 1
When I first played Netball, I started in 2010 when I was 10 yrs old. I felt pretty excited for joining the team, also I had to sign up. The thing that all Netball players do, is a warm up, then the stretches just to keep our calves and arms stretched . Sometimes I click my fingers so that they don’t get bent or hurt from the ball. Some skills that people would always do, is chest past, throwing them across and up into the air. When I get picked for being a GS, I practise and practise until I get the hang of it, sometimes I struggle to put my arms up above my head to goal in the ball, because I’ ve never done this kind of action before. The only thing I do when I shoot, is keep the ball at my chest and shoot it into the hoop.
Conclusion
How I feel about Netball is that, when I play, I feel really nervous because from the start
I stay in my position and do a little bit of a warm up. This poem that I had was a poem about my feelings, it said, To badly Ramona, don’t be sad, be glad, love from your little lad, Angela. The reason why she wrote this poem was because, I lost my game, I did feel bad, sad but I was starting to feel glad from the wonderful tasty and yummy treats . It was a cup of hot chips, a fizzy, a hot dog, a nugget and a block of CHOCOLATE, “Yummy!’
writing makes sense. Also make sure that I have checked my
spelling mistakes and do not forget about the 5 ws.
Who, What, Where, When and Why.
Plan
Intro: Netball- What I do first
P1. What are the skills an d when I started.
Conclusion. How do I feel playing Netball
Introduction of Netball
When I first go to Netball, the thing that all students do is sign up for the Netball team. Most often, we play before we get picked for the team, it’s really tough for the coach to decide because, their a always allot of Netball players who are really good but doesn't get picked for the Netball Team. When I get picked for playing Netball, the first thing that I do, is train myself to be a position where I can be an awesome defender and attacker. Being an defender is one of my favourite, because it brings my attention when I defend someone and I get caught for catching the ball and my team feels really cheerful because that’s when we get the ball into the hoop and, “SCORE!”
Writing Paragraph 1
When I first played Netball, I started in 2010 when I was 10 yrs old. I felt pretty excited for joining the team, also I had to sign up. The thing that all Netball players do, is a warm up, then the stretches just to keep our calves and arms stretched . Sometimes I click my fingers so that they don’t get bent or hurt from the ball. Some skills that people would always do, is chest past, throwing them across and up into the air. When I get picked for being a GS, I practise and practise until I get the hang of it, sometimes I struggle to put my arms up above my head to goal in the ball, because I’ ve never done this kind of action before. The only thing I do when I shoot, is keep the ball at my chest and shoot it into the hoop.
Conclusion
How I feel about Netball is that, when I play, I feel really nervous because from the start
I stay in my position and do a little bit of a warm up. This poem that I had was a poem about my feelings, it said, To badly Ramona, don’t be sad, be glad, love from your little lad, Angela. The reason why she wrote this poem was because, I lost my game, I did feel bad, sad but I was starting to feel glad from the wonderful tasty and yummy treats . It was a cup of hot chips, a fizzy, a hot dog, a nugget and a block of CHOCOLATE, “Yummy!’
Monday, September 26, 2011
T3W8 Rap With Mr. Umu
Plan
1 Paragraph
What is so fun with Mr Umu
Conclusion Lyrics of the Rap
Writing
Do you love rapping at your house or somewhere where you can rap? Well if you do why not listen to this wonderful amazing rap that Mr. Umu had taught a few weeks ago. Mr Umu is a really awesome teacher and guess what, he can rap just like you and he can even sing with a beautiful voice. He loves teaching and he started teaching in the year 1995, what a long time isn’t it, he like to talk in many other languages when he raps, I really like it how he sings and rap because he puts in a little bit of flavour. The reason why he is a great teacher is because recently I just LOOOVE how he sings. “What an amazing teacher he is!”
Conclusion
If you really love to rap listen to this awesome awesome rap, that Mr. Umu
has taught me and my class mates. It may not sound right to you when you sing along to the rap, but just find out what the words mean so then you will get the whole idea of this rap. If you see Mr. Umu, tell him that you LOVE the rap and also tell him, Thank You for teaching us this amazing rap.
Pack it up-Pack it in, let me begin.
Much respect to my peeps from Point England,
G.I skater’s, current status
Collaboration with my younger generators ah!
We in the cypher crowds twice the siza,
New MC’s spitting honeylike killer beez,
Brothers please spare a prayer for the families,
Hurricane to the crusaders down in Canterbury
Pagi to the popo, the popo to the pagi
Fia ae lo’u manava, I think I’m lē masagi
Lava loa lea fia ae so se mea mmmm
I like the smell of papaque over there,
Keke to the Pua’a, Pua’a to the keke
Thank you very much Point England Tu meke,
Tulou lava we must respect one another
My father my mother my sister and my brother
Written By Mr. Umu
1 Paragraph
What is so fun with Mr Umu
Conclusion Lyrics of the Rap
Writing
Do you love rapping at your house or somewhere where you can rap? Well if you do why not listen to this wonderful amazing rap that Mr. Umu had taught a few weeks ago. Mr Umu is a really awesome teacher and guess what, he can rap just like you and he can even sing with a beautiful voice. He loves teaching and he started teaching in the year 1995, what a long time isn’t it, he like to talk in many other languages when he raps, I really like it how he sings and rap because he puts in a little bit of flavour. The reason why he is a great teacher is because recently I just LOOOVE how he sings. “What an amazing teacher he is!”
Conclusion
If you really love to rap listen to this awesome awesome rap, that Mr. Umu
has taught me and my class mates. It may not sound right to you when you sing along to the rap, but just find out what the words mean so then you will get the whole idea of this rap. If you see Mr. Umu, tell him that you LOVE the rap and also tell him, Thank You for teaching us this amazing rap.
Pack it up-Pack it in, let me begin.
Much respect to my peeps from Point England,
G.I skater’s, current status
Collaboration with my younger generators ah!
We in the cypher crowds twice the siza,
New MC’s spitting honeylike killer beez,
Brothers please spare a prayer for the families,
Hurricane to the crusaders down in Canterbury
Pagi to the popo, the popo to the pagi
Fia ae lo’u manava, I think I’m lē masagi
Lava loa lea fia ae so se mea mmmm
I like the smell of papaque over there,
Keke to the Pua’a, Pua’a to the keke
Thank you very much Point England Tu meke,
Tulou lava we must respect one another
My father my mother my sister and my brother
Written By Mr. Umu
Friday, September 23, 2011
T3W7 Personal Project
These are the flags that play for the Rugby World Cup. One of these flag, is
the one that I represent, if you can name all of these you are one lucky person,
because if you represent your country, they will win. Well necessarily win, I just mean
cheer for your team, be happy that they are playing for the RWC, my country is never
playing for the RWC and I don't have a reason why.
T3W7 Typing Lessons F and J
Do you ever get stressed about your keyboard, well if you do, why not go onto this wonderful site called, http://www.freetypinggame.net/. The reason why I am telling you to go onto this perfect site is because it recently helps you by looking at your screen and typing, it makes it so simple. When I first got my Net Book I got really stressed about using the keyboards and guess what, I would always use my pointy finger for typing, that’s horrible. I think I’m learning how to type like a little kid. This site lets everyone play by contributing to their typing skills, ven though you might get stressed about it, you can give a go and when you make it you will earn a certificate. Maybe some day or sometime, you will get use to this wonderful game and you will get use to typing.
This is a certificate that I was given when I was playing, I got really stressed about it but, I tried my best to collect all the certificates and guess what? I got them all. Hopefully, you will enjoy this game so well.
T3W6 Writing A Place Where You Might Visit In USA
I you a wanting to go to U.S.A for a holiday or a trip, why not go to this wonderful place called The Grand Canyon. This place is a wonder of the world, some people would mostly kayak, camp or maybe even fish, or maybe search for something into the forest. Did you know that, The Grand Canyon is 277 miles (446 km) long, up to 18 miles (29 km) wide and attains a depth of over a mile (6,000 feet / 1,800 metres). In 1869, Major John Wesley Powell made a journey through the Grand Canyon by way of the Colorado River. People from all over the world, would travel to see the Grand Canyon, The Grand Canyon is a national park and has become a national landmark.
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