Volleyball Trials No.2

Since you’ve have started reading what I’ve written, keep reading, because today I’ll be writing about my one and only second favourite sport... “VOLLEYBALL!”  Well it’s actually about Volleyball, it’s about Volleyball trials, I went to sign up for Volleyball and it was trials.

For me, to be honest I don’t really know how I feel because, I’m moving to another country which is Australia which is obvious for some of you who I told. So, hopefully I’ll have heaps of time to play Volleyball and then go to Aussie.

My biggest hope about this is that I have heaps of time to play my second favourite sport, while my parents are buying a ticket for my  flight to Australia. I’ll be crossing my fingers while praying so that I could play Volleyball.

I would like to give a big thank you to my true hilarious friend David for editing my writing, making sure that it makes sense. Also goodbye to by cherished beautiful friends, Jasmine Tui, Cael, Tyla, David, Ngametua, Brooke, Tule, Millenny and Andrea. :)

Trialling out for Volleyball

Since you’ve have started reading what I’ve written, keep reading, because today I’ll be writing about my one and only second favourite sport... “VOLLEYBALL!”  Well it’s not actually about playing Volleyball, it’s about Volleyball trials, I went to sign up for Volleyball and it was trials.

For me, to be honest I don’t really know how I feel because I’m moving to another country and I don’t know when I’m actually going. So, hopefully I’ll have heaps of time to play Volleyball and then go to Aussie.

My biggest hope about this is that I have heaps of time to play my second favourite sport. While my parents are buying a ticket for my flight to Australia. I’ll be hoping and praying and crossing my fingers so that I don’t go before the Volleyball game.

I would like to thank David for editing my writing, making sure that it makes sense and also making sure that I follow my writing goal.

Smoking Kills Lives (Take 2)

From now and then, I’ll be writing about Smoking Kills Lives. Now the reason why I’m writing about this is because you can, you know die and also because Dad recently quit smoking.

The dangers of smoking includes disease of your heart, lungs and brain. Smoking increases the chances of getting these virus and smoking may cause disease. Such as lung cancer, heart disorder and emphysema. Your chances of getting these disorder is greater. Nothing about this dirty habit that is healthy for you!

Emphysema is a condition in which the air sacs of lungs are damaged and enlarged, causing breathlessness.  When you are smoking constantly, it will flow through your body and form a disease called cancer. How do you think cancer is made? Well, when you get cancer, it over takes your cells and make new ones that affect your body. This will then spread and also cause other virus. You also can get heart disease and this is one of the serious virus that may cause death.

Each day, 6,000 children under 18 years of age smoke their first cigarette. How is this situation having to inhale a smoke and knowing the possibility of their future? Now I have shown you the dangers of smoking and the likelihood of how you could get disease. So for those people who haven’t started this poor life choice, don’t even think about having a go.

Smoking Kills Lives

From now and then, I’ll be writing about Smoking Kills Lives. Now the reason why I’m writing about this is because recently, you can... You know, die and because my dad quit smoking.

The dangers of smoking includes diseases of your heart, lungs and brain. Smoking increases the chances of getting these disease, smoking may cause disease such as lung cancer, heart disease and emphysema. Your chances of getting these disease is greater. Smoking is very bad for you and it's also not good for your health.

Emphysema is a condition in which the air sacs of lungs are damaged and enlarged, causing breathlessness.  When you are smoking constantly, it will flow through your body and form a disease called cancer. How do you think cancer is mad?? Well, when you get cancer, it over takes your cells and make new ones that affect your body. This will then spread and also cause other disease. You also can get heart disease and this is one of the serious disease that may cause death.

Each day 3,000 children smoke their first cigarette, this is a very intense situation having the risk to inhale a smoke and knowing the possibility to your future. Now I have shown you the dangers in smoking and the likelihood on how you could get disease. So for those people who have started smoking well rethink and “STOP” well that was my advice for today.

Hopefully I’ll see the feedback.

My Friends (Take 2)

Hello and welcome to the day that  I’ll be telling you about my friends. The reason why, I’m writing about my friends is because I’m going to miss them. Friends and I mean my friends are special to me, to be honest, I don't have any clue.

My friends that I play with and that I sometimes hang out with are Jasmine, David, Cael, Tule, Millenny, Brooke, Tyla and Andrea. My friends are like my brother and sisters. I like it when they treat me with respect, but not only that, they are always there to help me when I’m in trouble.

The things that I like about my friends is that, they sometimes encourage me and help me when it’s an emergency. I don’t mean like a car accident, I mean like if I really need help for my school work then I’ll ask for help. So I would love to say a big thanks to my friends for doing not everything but something for me. It really appreciates me.

To my unique and wonderful, cherished friends, I am going to miss you heaps. I will never forget the times we spent together. Be good and also I’ll tell Mr. Barks how things are going. Hopefully I’ll get the opportunity to chat to you guys when you are available online. "Goodbye my friends, hopefully I'll come and visit you."

A big thanks to David for proof reading my writing, making sure that it makes sense. Thank you for making sure that I’ve followed my goal, which was... To use direct speech and interesting vocabulary in my writing.

My Friends

Hello and welcome. So today, I’ll be writing about my friends and the reason why I’m writing about my friends is because I’m going to miss them heaps.

My friends that I play with and that I sometimes hang out with are, Jasmine, David, Cael, Tule, Millenny, Brooke, Tyla, Eleva and Andrea. My friends are like my sisters and I like it when they treat me like that because it looks like they’re treating me like a real sister not my sisters at home. “Oh my God.”

The things that I like about my friends is that, they sometimes encourage me and they help me when it’s an emergency. I don’t mean like I had a car accident, I mean like if I really need help for my school work. So, are big thanks to my friends for doing not everything but something for me. It really appreciates me.

To my unique and wonderful, cherished friends, I am going to miss you heaps from the bottom of my heart. I will never forget the times we spent together like a family. Be good also I’ll tell Mr. Barks how things are going and hopefully chat to you guys when you guys are available online.