Friday, September 7, 2012

My Friends (Take 2)

Hello and welcome to the day that  I’ll be telling you about my friends. The reason why, I’m writing about my friends is because I’m going to miss them. Friends and I mean my friends are special to me, to be honest, I don't have any clue.

My friends that I play with and that I sometimes hang out with are Jasmine, David, Cael, Tule, Millenny, Brooke, Tyla and Andrea. My friends are like my brother and sisters. I like it when they treat me with respect, but not only that, they are always there to help me when I’m in trouble.

The things that I like about my friends is that, they sometimes encourage me and help me when it’s an emergency. I don’t mean like a car accident, I mean like if I really need help for my school work then I’ll ask for help. So I would love to say a big thanks to my friends for doing not everything but something for me. It really appreciates me.

To my unique and wonderful, cherished friends, I am going to miss you heaps. I will never forget the times we spent together. Be good and also I’ll tell Mr. Barks how things are going. Hopefully I’ll get the opportunity to chat to you guys when you are available online. "Goodbye my friends, hopefully I'll come and visit you."

A big thanks to David for proof reading my writing, making sure that it makes sense. Thank you for making sure that I’ve followed my goal, which was... To use direct speech and interesting vocabulary in my writing.

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