Monday, August 2, 2010

The Most Dangerous Volcano

When I watched my Volcano eruption it was amazing because lava came out of the volcano
and destroyed Eastland. To make my movie better I could've put some interesting things so it
could not be boring to watch. The part that was really good was when the lava that came out of
the volcano and destroyed the land. The thing that I have learnt from doing this eruption was by
using the ingredients to make it erupt. Next time I will change my voice-over to make it better
and interesting.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ramona,
    I think that this was a really creative city that has been made out of clay. I really like the clever vocab that you have put inside your sentences. Keep up the good work.
    From Makerita


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