Note: Remember I always have to indent and
check if my writing makes sence, also remember the 5 ws
Who, Where, What, When and Why
P.1 Talking about myself and my friends
P.2 What my friends a like and my culture
P.3 What my sister do and where she works
Conclusion Talking about the tasty food
Kia Ora my name is Ramona Koteka and I am 11 yrs old. I go to Point England School as a year 6, my teachers name is Mr Barks. He is a very awesome a teacher and he is tall, and is from Canada. His accent is very diffirent to my accent. I have got more friends that I play with. What I enjoy about them is that, they make me laugh they giggle with me and they are just enjoyable to play with.
They are my best friends that I have ever met, they a kind to other people and they are always friendly to others. My culture name is Cook Island and I am from a Island kind that of matches my Island, it is Rarotonga. Rarotonga was a very amazing place where my sister was born, my oldest sister. “I LOVE MY SISTER!”
My sisters name is Ngatamaine, she is the coach for the Netball team, she sometimes ref for my netball game and my netball team. Did you know that she works at the ANZ Netball that is where I play. When ever I see her work she gives me yummy tasty food like nuggets, hot dog, hot chips with tomatoe sauce on top.
They taste really delicious, if I eat where my sister works I say “Yummy” when she gives me food. I feel excited when my netball game is finished because I can hang around the netball court that is beside the Cafeteria.