Friday, October 28, 2011
T4W1 My Best Independent Writing
Note: Remember that I always have to indent my writing and use
different beginnings. Also remember the 5 W's,
Who, What, Where, When, and Why.???????
Details about the main idea, does this word best describe my writing, is it the best word to say what I mean????
The reason why I’m writing this is because I am trying to comprehend my learning, this writing is for the whole world to see and read.
School Holidays
Plan
Intro What’s happening for the holidays?
P.2 What is my favourite thing during the holidays?
P.3 How do I feel
Conclusion What is my goal for term 4?
Introduction
I so can’t wait for school holidays because my dad’s family is coming over for a visit, even though the date has passed it was on the 1st week of school holidays. I felt pretty excited because the feed was at my grandmas house, I think it’s going to be a really big feast. After my dads family visit my family and I are going to the beach for a picnic, what an amazing holiday that I’m having. Holidays is on for 2 weeks, how cool is that.
Writing 2
My favourite thing during the holidays is meeting my dads special family because recently I haven’t seen my cousins for a few yrs. They haven’t notice me since for a few yrs but they are still my cousins, this was my 1st favourite thing in the holidays. “What was my 2nd favourite thing in the holidays? Well, as you know that some of you students have been to the beach for a picnic, that is just what I did but different days and different times. Going to the beach was making my heart pump, it meant to me that I was so nervous to go to the beach. As we got their, it was packed of allot kids and adults playing and having allot of fun. I wished that could make new friends just to make me happy and enjoyable because I haven’t seen any friends from my school but my cousin Ashin. My very funny cousin was playing basketball with his mates, feeling playful.
Writing 3
The feeling about my holiday is kind of a bit fun because their were just about two things that I did in the holidays. It is worth, a bit. Sometimes I feel sad, sometimes I feel mad because staying at home is a feeling to me that is so boring. Some day I will feel happy and some day I would feel so excited when I do something fun and go somewhere that I haven’t been to and that looks so interesting to see.
Conclusion
My goal for term 4 is to focused on what I’m doing even though if someone talks to me I really have to ignore them. When the teacher tells me what to do I have to do, the reason why I have to learn more is to make my family proud, proud of me and proud of what I have for my learning. Sometimes I just can’t be focused when people are talking around me, I just feel like I’m not focused. Sometimes I’m learning on my work but sometimes I’m not, not working is not my type but working is. This whole thing is about my learning for Term 4.
different beginnings. Also remember the 5 W's,
Who, What, Where, When, and Why.???????
Details about the main idea, does this word best describe my writing, is it the best word to say what I mean????
The reason why I’m writing this is because I am trying to comprehend my learning, this writing is for the whole world to see and read.
School Holidays
Plan
Intro What’s happening for the holidays?
P.2 What is my favourite thing during the holidays?
P.3 How do I feel
Conclusion What is my goal for term 4?
Introduction
I so can’t wait for school holidays because my dad’s family is coming over for a visit, even though the date has passed it was on the 1st week of school holidays. I felt pretty excited because the feed was at my grandmas house, I think it’s going to be a really big feast. After my dads family visit my family and I are going to the beach for a picnic, what an amazing holiday that I’m having. Holidays is on for 2 weeks, how cool is that.
Writing 2
My favourite thing during the holidays is meeting my dads special family because recently I haven’t seen my cousins for a few yrs. They haven’t notice me since for a few yrs but they are still my cousins, this was my 1st favourite thing in the holidays. “What was my 2nd favourite thing in the holidays? Well, as you know that some of you students have been to the beach for a picnic, that is just what I did but different days and different times. Going to the beach was making my heart pump, it meant to me that I was so nervous to go to the beach. As we got their, it was packed of allot kids and adults playing and having allot of fun. I wished that could make new friends just to make me happy and enjoyable because I haven’t seen any friends from my school but my cousin Ashin. My very funny cousin was playing basketball with his mates, feeling playful.
Writing 3
The feeling about my holiday is kind of a bit fun because their were just about two things that I did in the holidays. It is worth, a bit. Sometimes I feel sad, sometimes I feel mad because staying at home is a feeling to me that is so boring. Some day I will feel happy and some day I would feel so excited when I do something fun and go somewhere that I haven’t been to and that looks so interesting to see.
Conclusion
My goal for term 4 is to focused on what I’m doing even though if someone talks to me I really have to ignore them. When the teacher tells me what to do I have to do, the reason why I have to learn more is to make my family proud, proud of me and proud of what I have for my learning. Sometimes I just can’t be focused when people are talking around me, I just feel like I’m not focused. Sometimes I’m learning on my work but sometimes I’m not, not working is not my type but working is. This whole thing is about my learning for Term 4.
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
T3W9 My Best Independent Writing
Note: Remember that I always have to indent and check if my
writing makes sense. Also make sure that I have checked my
spelling mistakes and do not forget about the 5 ws.
Who, What, Where, When and Why.
Plan
Intro: Netball- What I do first
P1. What are the skills an d when I started.
Conclusion. How do I feel playing Netball
Introduction of Netball
When I first go to Netball, the thing that all students do is sign up for the Netball team. Most often, we play before we get picked for the team, it’s really tough for the coach to decide because, their a always allot of Netball players who are really good but doesn't get picked for the Netball Team. When I get picked for playing Netball, the first thing that I do, is train myself to be a position where I can be an awesome defender and attacker. Being an defender is one of my favourite, because it brings my attention when I defend someone and I get caught for catching the ball and my team feels really cheerful because that’s when we get the ball into the hoop and, “SCORE!”
Writing Paragraph 1
When I first played Netball, I started in 2010 when I was 10 yrs old. I felt pretty excited for joining the team, also I had to sign up. The thing that all Netball players do, is a warm up, then the stretches just to keep our calves and arms stretched . Sometimes I click my fingers so that they don’t get bent or hurt from the ball. Some skills that people would always do, is chest past, throwing them across and up into the air. When I get picked for being a GS, I practise and practise until I get the hang of it, sometimes I struggle to put my arms up above my head to goal in the ball, because I’ ve never done this kind of action before. The only thing I do when I shoot, is keep the ball at my chest and shoot it into the hoop.
Conclusion
How I feel about Netball is that, when I play, I feel really nervous because from the start
I stay in my position and do a little bit of a warm up. This poem that I had was a poem about my feelings, it said, To badly Ramona, don’t be sad, be glad, love from your little lad, Angela. The reason why she wrote this poem was because, I lost my game, I did feel bad, sad but I was starting to feel glad from the wonderful tasty and yummy treats . It was a cup of hot chips, a fizzy, a hot dog, a nugget and a block of CHOCOLATE, “Yummy!’
writing makes sense. Also make sure that I have checked my
spelling mistakes and do not forget about the 5 ws.
Who, What, Where, When and Why.
Plan
Intro: Netball- What I do first
P1. What are the skills an d when I started.
Conclusion. How do I feel playing Netball
Introduction of Netball
When I first go to Netball, the thing that all students do is sign up for the Netball team. Most often, we play before we get picked for the team, it’s really tough for the coach to decide because, their a always allot of Netball players who are really good but doesn't get picked for the Netball Team. When I get picked for playing Netball, the first thing that I do, is train myself to be a position where I can be an awesome defender and attacker. Being an defender is one of my favourite, because it brings my attention when I defend someone and I get caught for catching the ball and my team feels really cheerful because that’s when we get the ball into the hoop and, “SCORE!”
Writing Paragraph 1
When I first played Netball, I started in 2010 when I was 10 yrs old. I felt pretty excited for joining the team, also I had to sign up. The thing that all Netball players do, is a warm up, then the stretches just to keep our calves and arms stretched . Sometimes I click my fingers so that they don’t get bent or hurt from the ball. Some skills that people would always do, is chest past, throwing them across and up into the air. When I get picked for being a GS, I practise and practise until I get the hang of it, sometimes I struggle to put my arms up above my head to goal in the ball, because I’ ve never done this kind of action before. The only thing I do when I shoot, is keep the ball at my chest and shoot it into the hoop.
Conclusion
How I feel about Netball is that, when I play, I feel really nervous because from the start
I stay in my position and do a little bit of a warm up. This poem that I had was a poem about my feelings, it said, To badly Ramona, don’t be sad, be glad, love from your little lad, Angela. The reason why she wrote this poem was because, I lost my game, I did feel bad, sad but I was starting to feel glad from the wonderful tasty and yummy treats . It was a cup of hot chips, a fizzy, a hot dog, a nugget and a block of CHOCOLATE, “Yummy!’
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