A Very Tragec Story

Hello and welcome to my story of two girls fighting over a boy. This sounds really sad because this 10 yr old girl Joanna died. The title of this story is "Fight Over Boy' Leaves US Girl "Dead", it's actually from the news. First the beginning of this true sad story is that, after school two very young girls got into a fight just about a boy. Their school name was called, Southern California Elementary School, this young girl told her mother that she was feeling very ill on the way home.

Joanna the girl that was fighting, died hours later. She was complaining to her mother that she wasn't feeling well so they went home. Joanna's mother changed her clothes and took her to the hospital but it was too late. She was in coma when they took her to the hospital.

Joanna died at a Long Beach hospital at 9 pm Friday, about six hours after the fight in an alley. People have not released the girl's name, the one who was fighting with Joanna. The daughter's mother was crying so bad to know what happened. Police, who have interviewed the other girl involved in the fight, were investigating and said that no arrests were immediately planned.



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"Fight Over Boy Leaves US Girl Dead"


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Ramona

WHo Am I

Who Am I?

Born in New Zealand and turning 12 on May
2000

My dad’s name :
Koteka Timoteo

Mum’s name:
Amiria Putai

Siblings:
4 brothers, 4 sisters
Older sister - Works at Alexandra Park and
the Netball Centre in Glenn Innes

Cousins:
Maru, TJ, Lauryn - Frances,
Prudence, Timmie, Tauhere, Tanu, Herman
Takai, Timmy, Ngametua.

Schools that my siblings go to:
Tamaki College and Point England


Tanu - kid, Tauhere, Timmie

Impossible by Shontelle - Lyrics

Do any of you know Shontelles song called Impossible,
well if not here it goes.

Lyrics of “Impossible” By Shontelle

I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did, I did

And you were strong and I was not,
My illusion, my mistake,
I was careless, I forgot,
I did


And now when all is done,
There is nothing to say
You have gone and so effortlessly
You have won
You can go ahead tell them


Tell them all I know now
Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the Skyline
All we had is gone now
Tell them I was happy
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible,
Impossible, impossible,
Falling out of love is hard
Falling for bretrayal is worst
Broken trust, Broken Hearts
I know, I know
Thinking all you need is here
Building faith on love and words
Empty promises will wear
I know (I know)
And now when all is gone
There is nothing to say
And if your done embarrassing me
On your own go ahead tell them


Tell them all I know now,
Shout it from the roof tops,
Write it on the skyline
All we had is gone now
Tell them I was happy
In my heart is broken
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible

ooh impossible (yeah) (yeah)

I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did, I did

Tell all I know now
Shout it from the roof top
Write it from the Skyline
All we had is gone now
Tell them I was happy ( I was happy)
And my heart broken
All my scars a open
Tell them what i hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible

I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did, I did



The story to this song is about a women saying that she remebers years ago that someone told her that she would take caution when it comes to love and she did. Also saying that someone is strong and saying that she’s not. Her heart is broken and all her scars open. She’s telling them what she hoped would be impossible.

The End of Story.

X7 Vocabulary for CS - CyberSmart

X7 Vocabulary

8.) Comments - Someone saying something on the computer or speaking in front of their face. Comments is when people could say something nice for example like looking onto someones blog and saying something nice about their work.

9.) Footprint - The area taken up by some object

10.) Surfing - Waves breaking on the shore or Ride the waves of the sea
with a surfboard

11.) Graphics - The meaning of graphics is when someone is drawing or
photographing in the layout of a book.

12.) Legal - Legal is a thing where kids go onto other sites that their not surppose to go on like facebook, youtube, or even download music.

13.) Positive - Something that is good to shown in front of the whole world even a movie program for kids.

14.) Audience - People gathering around looking to see what’s happening or a whole heap of people with kids watching something on a big screen.

My 7 Vocabulary for CyberSmart

7 Vocab

1.) Manipulate - A meaning that is not expressly stated but can be inferred.
Inferred - Guess correctly; solve by thinking.

2.) Download - To transfer content such as video, software or photo’s from a web sever to you computer.

3.) Specific - When someone is telling something but telling them parts of what they wrote.

4.) Ownership - When someone takes good care and being responsible for other people’s stuff and their own stuff.

5.) Responsibility - A student successful by doing their own work. Also not going onto other ilegal sites on their Netbook.

6.) Images - Images is the meanings for photo for people to upload onto their laptop.

7.) Internet - Internet is a site that everybody loves to go on. It’s a site where you get to do

My Awesome Time At Alexandra Park

From the very beginning of my holidays, my sister, my brother in law went to Alexandra Park for Breakfast and I realized that she works their. I felt kind of shy and scared because it has been my first time their, talking to my sister's friends made me feel like I get to know them better then my sister. After ordering my breakfast I was looking to see what it looked like inside, to me it looked huge with, big four flax screens together attached to the wall. I was getting use to the inside of Cafeteria, so then I started walking around watching the horses race. My heart was telling me to join in but that was in my dream. I really did have an awesome time with my sister and my brother in law.

T1W2 First Time at Technology

Hello and welcome . For this time I am going to tell you my first time at Technology. As you will know that all the yr 7s went to Tamaki College for technology to learn about how to make stuff and bake stuff. My group for tech was Electronics. I was pretty happy when I heard the name Electronic because I actually wanted to know how to make electric stuff that won't hurt me. So by the time I got to the other side of the school I was pretty much confused because everybody from my school was pretty much all over place around Tamaki College. Finally the teachers settled up the groups, just to make everyone not get confused.


While waiting for a teacher to come and take my group to a lab, I really wanted to join in Food. The reason why I wanted to join in food was because I love eating and I love cooking and baking. When Mr Malhotra came along I was quite happy that he was our tech teacher for 14 weeks. After introducing himself, he took us to the lab which was EP1. The lab looked huge, I really wanted to muck around in the lab.


Finally we got to write something rather then just sitting on the chairs waiting for stuff to be done. But we do have to listen to the instructions so we all know what to do. In the classroom I loved the long big chairs, the touch screen and the two sliding board that can go up and down.


For tech it would be more fun and interesting if we all did something that could make us work as a team because it would just be boring just sitting doing nothing. But I still had fun at tech.

Week 2 Term 1 2012 My Goals

Kia Orana my name is Ramona and I go to Point England School as a yr 7 student. I am writing this because recently I am going to introduce to you about myself and write you about my goals.

First my favourite subject during school is art, and I have got 4 friends in my class room 18 and 2 friends from another classroom. I am 11 yrs old and turning 12 on May the 31st. I still feel like I'm a yr 6 student because how I am still in the same class.

My favourite food is hot chips mostly chocolate and fizzy," Yummy" I also love KFC, Carls Jr, Mc Ds and Burger King. The fewest sports that I really want to join is Netball, Vollyball, Touch and the jobs that I would really like to participate in is Barista, Sports monitor, Office monitor and also a Assembly committee.

My goals for this 2012 is to work hard not necessarily smart and move away from the person that is talking to me. Also I need to ignore what they are saying to me move on with my own work. Listening to what the teacher is telling me what to do makes me know what I have to do during every rotation.