From now and then, I’ll be writing about Smoking Kills Lives. Now the reason why I’m writing about this is because you can, you know die and also because Dad recently quit smoking.
The dangers of smoking includes disease of your heart, lungs and brain. Smoking increases the chances of getting these virus and smoking may cause disease. Such as lung cancer, heart disorder and emphysema. Your chances of getting these disorder is greater. Nothing about this dirty habit that is healthy for you!
Emphysema is a condition in which the air sacs of lungs are damaged and enlarged, causing breathlessness. When you are smoking constantly, it will flow through your body and form a disease called cancer. How do you think cancer is made? Well, when you get cancer, it over takes your cells and make new ones that affect your body. This will then spread and also cause other virus. You also can get heart disease and this is one of the serious virus that may cause death.
Each day, 6,000 children under 18 years of age smoke their first cigarette. How is this situation having to inhale a smoke and knowing the possibility of their future? Now I have shown you the dangers of smoking and the likelihood of how you could get disease. So for those people who haven’t started this poor life choice, don’t even think about having a go.
From now and then, I’ll be writing about Smoking Kills Lives. Now the reason why I’m writing about this is because recently, you can... You know, die and because my dad quit smoking.
The dangers of smoking includes diseases of your heart, lungs and brain. Smoking increases the chances of getting these disease, smoking may cause disease such as lung cancer, heart disease and emphysema. Your chances of getting these disease is greater. Smoking is very bad for you and it's also not good for your health.
Emphysema is a condition in which the air sacs of lungs are damaged and enlarged, causing breathlessness. When you are smoking constantly, it will flow through your body and form a disease called cancer. How do you think cancer is mad?? Well, when you get cancer, it over takes your cells and make new ones that affect your body. This will then spread and also cause other disease. You also can get heart disease and this is one of the serious disease that may cause death.
Each day 3,000 children smoke their first cigarette, this is a very intense situation having the risk to inhale a smoke and knowing the possibility to your future. Now I have shown you the dangers in smoking and the likelihood on how you could get disease. So for those people who have started smoking well rethink and “STOP” well that was my advice for today.
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Hello and welcome to the day that I’ll be telling you about my friends. The reason why, I’m writing about my friends is because I’m going to miss them. Friends and I mean my friends are special to me, to be honest, I don't have any clue.
My friends that I play with and that I sometimes hang out with are Jasmine, David, Cael, Tule, Millenny, Brooke, Tyla and Andrea. My friends are like my brother and sisters. I like it when they treat me with respect, but not only that, they are always there to help me when I’m in trouble.
The things that I like about my friends is that, they sometimes encourage me and help me when it’s an emergency. I don’t mean like a car accident, I mean like if I really need help for my school work then I’ll ask for help. So I would love to say a big thanks to my friends for doing not everything but something for me. It really appreciates me.
To my unique and wonderful, cherished friends, I am going to miss you heaps. I will never forget the times we spent together. Be good and also I’ll tell Mr. Barks how things are going. Hopefully I’ll get the opportunity to chat to you guys when you are available online. "Goodbye my friends, hopefully I'll come and visit you."
A big thanks to David for proof reading my writing, making sure that it makes sense. Thank you for making sure that I’ve followed my goal, which was... To use direct speech and interesting vocabulary in my writing.
Hello and welcome. So today, I’ll be writing about my friends and the reason why I’m writing about my friends is because I’m going to miss them heaps.
My friends that I play with and that I sometimes hang out with are, Jasmine, David, Cael, Tule, Millenny, Brooke, Tyla, Eleva and Andrea. My friends are like my sisters and I like it when they treat me like that because it looks like they’re treating me like a real sister not my sisters at home. “Oh my God.”
The things that I like about my friends is that, they sometimes encourage me and they help me when it’s an emergency. I don’t mean like I had a car accident, I mean like if I really need help for my school work. So, are big thanks to my friends for doing not everything but something for me. It really appreciates me.
To my unique and wonderful, cherished friends, I am going to miss you heaps from the bottom of my heart. I will never forget the times we spent together like a family. Be good also I’ll tell Mr. Barks how things are going and hopefully chat to you guys when you guys are available online.
I’ve always wanted to win a prize but it’s just that my goal doesn’t work when I say so. But, I figure out how I might win that special prize so here’s my thinking and I mean my goal. My goal is to push myself to work smart not necessarily hard and just concentrate on my own specific work that Mr. Barks has assigned to me. So that’s my goal.
“Eyes on Me,” says Mr.Barks. As he’s talking, he is telling us about how our assignments are going. I cross my fingers and listen to see if I’m still in the runners up. “Yes, oh yeah oh ha", I said, celebrating with excitement, because I’ve completed my XtraMath, Readingeggs which is the Comprehension Gym, Stadium and the Library. While he’s carrying on I feel “Stink,” because I haven’t finished the Freestyle Usage. So, I suddenly say “Oh man,” I was at least an inch to be winning, breakfast prize.
My goal for next is to find an independant spot for me to get all my assigned task done for the week. Also make sure that my friends don’t interrupt me or else, I’ll just say “Be quiet.” So fingers cross that next time when something like this happens, I have to do my own independent work during class and manage my time so that I don't have to be on detention. So, finger crossed.
My Heart is Pumping, and I’m shaking which makes me get the feeling that I’m really really... to say the least nervous about the Beep Test. The reason I’m feeling all shaky and all that is because, the Beep Test can be really tiring and more challenging. After getting ready, I'm starting to feel more pressure on me which makes me feel really uncertain.
When I suddenly heard the “BEEP” sound, I started running and I felt like I was staring off a bit slow and running to beat Jasmine who was trying to race me to the other side of the court, suddenly she bumped me into the person next to me. Starting the Beep Test made everyone in Room 18 look very uncomfortable.
While the other students trying to improve, I dropped out, because I felt puffed out and my calves were burning. When I dropped out on level 3, I was pretty disappointed because my goal was to pass level 5, ah well. I hope next year my class and I get the opportunity to do the Beep Test again. So a big thanks to Miss Vaafusuaga for letting us do the Beep Test.
The things that I liked about the tiring beep test is that, it’s really challenging because I “LOVE” playing sports that are tiring and heaps more challenging and it can be fun as well.
The London 2012 Olympic Games Opening Ceremony took place at 9pm on 27 July 2012. The Olympic games were opened by Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth ll. The ceremony that was shown on television was pretty much awesome, and I "LOVED" it.
The things that I liked about the Ceremony, is that, it looked like their was party going on but “No.” No offence but I think that the opening ceremony was better than Queens birthday. “Sorry your Majesty,” just to be honest.
The thing that I can’t wait to see in the olympic games is... “BADMINTON!” The reason I can’t wait to watch the Badminton players play is because Badminton is a favourite sport of mine and I just love watching and playing Badminton. Also another thing that I can’t wait to see is Tennis players play, because again it’s a favourite sport of mine and I just “LOVE” Tennis.
Thanks to Tui for editing and checking if my writing makes sense, also thank you for checking my spelling, putting in interesting vocab and capital letters.
